What remains unsaid is haunting. You are repulsed by your train of thought, yet realize that the truth may be worse than your strangled imagination. reactions telling the unspoken - ominous ...they have been touched
tears flowing face contorted, body tensed... i'm startled by his silence
The playground's edge; sun-dress and sunshine playfully splayed. Childhood fading, she caresses her baby bump.
begging bus fare - clutching at hems somber faces
Their marriage confounds; her best friend, his lover. The CLACK gives a reprieve ...old ammunition
diaper sores no comfort found in sour milk
Six, no words still - plucked hair and suckled thumb. She grafts him in, our new family member ...one day he's gone.
Stanza 1: This could mean so many things to so many different people. it is the first of many powerful remarks made in this piece and a nearly perfect opener for it. It draws the reader to to want to know more while still giving a sense as to what the piece is about (loss and a need for understanding and compassion)
Stanza 2: Here I picture a young boy silently crying while a male figure in his life looks on with disdain or with no care at all. I could be wrong but that is how I see it.
Stanza 3: Again I picture the little boy whose mother is trying, but she is more worried about what is to come than what is already there in front of her.
Stanza 4 - 8: I see the little boy grown, almost, and experiencing life for himself and realizing that it is not all flowers and sunshine and that sometimes life really does just suck, but we get through it in the end even if we only have ourselves.
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Bluefley has a gallery filled with artwork that whisks you off in to a Sci-fi daydream, and keeps you captivated for hours. Marc has been a member of our community for over a decade and has achieved nothing but success with his astounding commitment to interacting with the community, sharing a prolific amount of video tutorials and generally being an all round rockstar deviant. It is no joke that we are absolutely delighted to award the Deviousness Award for April 2014 to ... Read More