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The river birch
distanced from its namesake
weeps amber tears,
dripping leaves, like blossoms casting petals;
pale upon a verdant field.
Approaching summer
bears no consolation.
:iconrlkirkland:
The title is derived from from the separation of the tree from its sustaining river.

The poor tree, lovely with its peeled-paper bark, is far from a water source. I suspect that it goes through periods of stress during heat waves. Regardless of the cause, it drops some of its leaves at times late spring throughout the summer.
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*SylvanSmith Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice.
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:sun: Thanks!
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~chadwood Jun 6, 2012   Writer
Like a perfectly times macro shot... the little tells a lot
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*rlkirkland Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a style that I enjoy - snapshots of the simple things that add a dimension of wonder to my life.
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:iconsomnomollior:
That's a lovely and moving image.
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :aww:
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*halcyonshores Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautifully written. :heart:
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconredheartplz:
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*halcyonshores Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconawwplz: :iconsmallheartplz:
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:icongileswatson:
Lovely poem. There is something of the Anglo-Saxon riddle in its economy.
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